- From: Carlos A Velasco <carlos.velasco@fit.fraunhofer.de>
- Date: Mon, 01 Jul 2013 13:33:19 +0200
- To: Christophe Strobbe <strobbe@hdm-stuttgart.de>
- Cc: ERT WG <public-wai-ert@w3.org>
Hi Christophe, thanks for your comments. I will update the requirements document accordingly. On 27/06/13 15:02, Christophe Strobbe wrote: > Hi, > > Am Di, 25.06.2013, 16:08 schrieb Shadi Abou-Zahra: >> Dear Group, >> >> The latest requirements document for review is here: >> - http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/WD-AERT/ED-requirements > > Some comments that are strictly speaking editorial: > * Objectives: 1: I would rephrase "their typical features" to "typical > features of such tools"; we don't want "their" to refer back to > "developers" ;-) > * Under "Types of tools": "Industrial/commercial and open source tools, > which test" should be rephrased to "Industrial/commercial and open source > tools that test" (without the "German comma"!), because the current > punctuation assumes that all tools test websites and applications. > * Under "Types of tools": "Focused tools, which test" -> "Focused tools > that ..." (same reason as previous comment). > > Best regards, > > Christophe > > >> >> Regards, >> Shadi >> >> -- >> Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ >> Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office >> Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG) >> Research and Development Working Group (RDWG) >> >> >> >> > > -- Best Regards, Mit freundlichen Grüßen, Saludos, carlos Dr Carlos A Velasco Fraunhofer Institute for Applied Information Technology FIT Web Compliance Center: http://imergo.com/ · http://imergo.de/ Schloss Birlinghoven, D53757 Sankt Augustin (Germany) Tel: +49-2241-142609 · Fax: +49-2241-1442609
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