[Fwd: About the "Pointer Methods in RDF" document]

Following Shadi's suggestion, I am forwarding the list a few comments I 
had sent him a few days ago.

I hope they can be useful for the group. Thanks.

Ciao,
Gabriele

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  • From: Gabriele Bartolini <gabriele.bartolini@devise.it>
  • Date: Tue, 17 Mar 2009 19:33:18 +0100
  • Subject: About the "Pointer Methods in RDF" document
  • To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
  • Message-ID: <49BFECEE.80309@devise.it>
Hi Shadi,

   I have been looking in the last 2 weeks at the document "Pointer 
Methods in RDF". Apart from saying that you guys have done a great job 
in examining several combinations, I want to say just a couple of comments:

1) I found a possible typo in paragraph 1.3 (I guess it is 'storing' 
rather than 'storeing')
2) I have noticed that the examples make usage of the rdf:resource 
property attributes rather than be more detailed. It is my view as 
newbie on the topic. For instance, take examples from 1 to 4, or
3) Example 1: it uses the PointersGroup class - which is a generic class 
and can be used, but before there is written that one specific class 
SHOULD be used (maybe the example could be changed with a specific class)
4) Example 4: maybe I have misunderstood it, but it makes usage of the 
SinglePointer class - which is abstract - and therefore should not be 
used (am I right?)
5) Before example 2.14 I would write a note saying that the 
#lineCharPointer and #charOffsetPointer have been previously defined

   This is just a short list of comments. I will continue reading the 
document. I apologise for not having been able to respond more quickly. 
I have noticed that you have already published the document and I am 
really disappointed with myself (I had this list ready last week - just 
did not have time to send it any earlier!).

   Please let me know. Thanks.

Ciao,
Gabriele

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Gabriele Bartolini: Data miner at Devise.IT
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"Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate"
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