- From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 27 May 2008 05:05:38 +0200
- To: Johannes Koch <johannes.koch@fit.fraunhofer.de>
- CC: ERT WG <public-wai-ert@w3.org>
Hi Johannes, Ref: <http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/Content/WD-Content-in-RDF-20080327> The document looks really good but I think the abstract and introduction sections are too brief. These sections should describe what is inside the document, in a way that could be understood without having to read the whole document. *grin* Also, I think it would be very important to highlight the relationship to HTTP-in-RDF and possibly also EARL. It may be worth considering to move what is currently in section 1.3 directly into the introduction (section 1). Not sure though, you'll need to play around a bit to see what works best editorially. Do others have similar reactions? Regards, Shadi -- Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ | WAI International Program Office Activity Lead | W3C Evaluation & Repair Tools Working Group Chair |
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