RE: Invitation to participate in the WAI Curricula work

Sounds good to me. The hyphen is not a problem for me, but the lists did seem a bit distracting.

Thanks!



Daniel Montalvo

Accessibility Education and Training Specialist
W3C/WAI

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, April 29, 2020 4:35 PM
> To: Daniel Montalvo <dmontalvo@w3.org>; public-wai-curricula@w3.org; 'EOWG Chairs' <team-eowg-chairs@w3.org>
> Subject: Re: Invitation to participate in the WAI Curricula work
> 
> Thanks Daniel.
> 
> The intent is to make the links stand out more clearly. When they're at the end of a paragraph, they wrap and the entire mail seems
> convoluted.
> Usually I add a spacing sentence and hyphen before links in emails but maybe this is just a personal preference. I went ahead and changed
> the list items to just a hyphen. We could remove the hyphen too but I would personally not merge the link into the proceeding paragraphs.
> 
> Best,
>    Shadi
> 
> 
> On 29/04/2020 16:05, Daniel Montalvo wrote:
> > Thanks for this, Shadi,
> >
> > This is really good. People may need to adapt it to their own requirements (as it is already anticipated in this wiki page).
> >
> > Just a couple of minor suggestions.
> >
> > Currently the links to the curricula and the MOOC Course are wrapped in a list of one item each. Is this intentional? I would lean to
> removing these lists and adding the links to the previous paragraph, as the lists don't really add too much value to the actual information
> that we are communicating.
> > Thanks.
> >
> > Best.
> >
> >
> >
> > Daniel Montalvo
> >
> > Accessibility Education and Training Specialist W3C/WAI
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
> >> Sent: Tuesday, April 28, 2020 7:00 PM
> >> To: public-wai-curricula@w3.org; EOWG Chairs
> >> <team-eowg-chairs@w3.org>
> >> Subject: Invitation to participate in the WAI Curricula work
> >>
> >> Dear Curricula TF, and EOWG Chairs,
> >>
> >> Ref:
> >> https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/WAI_Curricula/WAI_Curricula_TF/Invitat
> >> ion
> >>
> >> Apologies for the delay on this, please find a first draft
> >> boilerplate invitation for EOWG participants to adapt and reuse. Comments welcome.
> >>
> >> Best,
> >>     Shadi
> >>
> >> --
> >> Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ Accessibility
> >> Strategy and Technology Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> >> World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
> >
> >
> >
> 
> --
> Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

Received on Wednesday, 29 April 2020 14:43:49 UTC