Re: Review request for issue #52 Improve description of Generative AI elements

Thank you Gerard.

This aspect is planned to be handled in issue #53 
https://github.com/w3c/voiceinteraction/issues/53 Add section how to 
cope with private data. So far my changes are restricted to those from 
issue #52 in the sections and images detailed before.

Dirk


On 16/10/2024 16:51, Gerard CHOLLET wrote:
> Thanks very much Dirk. I read : "Apple’s Siri, Google Assistant, 
> Microsoft’s Cortana, Samsung’s Bixby and many more are helping us
> with various tasks, like shopping, playing music, setting a schedule, 
> sending messages, and offering answers to simple questions."
> Yes but these assistants are not personal. They are helping everyone. 
> They are also exploiting our data to make money,...
>
> All the best,                  Gérard
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> *De: *"Dirk Schnelle-Walka" <dirk@switch-consulting.de>
> *À: *"public-voiceinteraction" <public-voiceinteraction@w3.org>
> *Envoyé: *Mardi 15 Octobre 2024 19:03:29
> *Objet: *Review request for issue #52 Improve description of 
> Generative AI  elements
>
> Dear all,
>
> I completed my work on 
> https://github.com/w3c/voiceinteraction/issues/52 Improve description 
> of Generative AI elements and would like to ask for a review. Maybe, 
> you still see some room for improvement?
>
> Changes are available at 
> https://w3c.github.io/voiceinteraction/voice%20interaction%20drafts/paArchitecture/paArchitecture-1-3.htm
>
> Here are some things that I changed
>
>   * Section 3.2 Dialog Layer
>  *
>       o Introduced 2 paths for Traditional NLU (figure 2a) and
>         Generative AI (Figure 2b)
>       o Introduced 2 new subsections to better structure the document
>      o
>           + 3.2.4 Traditional NLU-based Systems
>          +
>               # Old content but shifted to a new place
>           + 3.2.5 Generative AI-based Systems
>          +
>               # New content
>   * Section 3.3.5 IPA Providers
>  *
>       o No detailed insight about IPAs. so reddraw IPA Provider
>         component and removed sections
>      o
>           + Provider ASR
>           + Provider NLU
>           + Provider Intent Set
>       o Redraw Figure 3
>   * Section 5.1 Detailed Walkthrough for Traditional NLU Systems
>  *
>       o Renamed heading to indicate it is for NLU only
>       o Added hint about 2 ntaures of nested IPAs
>   * Section 5.1.1 Walkthrough for the Input Path
>  *
>       o Redraw figure
>   * Section 5.1.2 Walkthrough for the Output Path
>  *
>       o Redraw figure
>
> Side note
>
>   * As per my perception the concept of Agentig Applications are
>     already covered by the External Data / Services / IPA Providers
>     layer. We may want to add one or two sentences about that if you
>     agree.
>
> Thank you,
> Dirk
>
>