Re: Call for Consensus to request transition of IMSC 1.1 to CR2

Hi Nigel, all,

I made a first full read of the CR2 and found some minor editorial things:

- Is this sentence still needed in the abstract "Both profiles are based on
[SUBM]." Not to remove the credit of the original proposal but I don't
think it's that important to be in the abstract. It could be moved to the
"Acknowledgment section" for example, which could also be updated.

- The MPEG DASH example in 5.4 still mentions 1.0.1. It could be updated to
also include an example with im2t/im2i.

- There are 2 rows with "#profile-full-version-2"

- #writingMode-vertical is not listed in alphabetical order

- In Section 7.7, the use of "the rectangular area" is not clear as it is
not defined. I would say:
"The Root Container Region of a Document Instance SHALL be mapped to *a
rectangular area associated with* each image frame of the Related Video
Object according to the following:"

- " instead of an attribute in the TT Style Namespaces:"
I read that "as a replacement of an attribute in the TT Style Namespacess"
and that's probably not the intention. I would remove that text or replace
"instead of" by "at the same place as" or "as if it were an attribute in
the TT Style Namespaces, except that it keeps its own namespace".

HTH,
Cyril

On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 9:42 AM Nigel Megitt <nigel.megitt@bbc.co.uk> wrote:

> All,
>
> As agreed during yesterday's call
> <https://www.w3.org/2018/06/28-tt-minutes.html#item11>, the open pull
> requests on IMSC 1.1 have been merged into the editor's draft so the
> complete document can be reviewed. This means that part of the normal
> review period for pull requests is being run simultaneously with this call
> for consensus to request transition.
>
> This email is a call for consensus to request transition of IMSC 1.1 to
> CR2 based on the ED.
>
> *Please review the CR2 draft* at
> https://rawgit.com/w3c/imsc/imsc1.1-cr2/imsc1/spec/ttml-ww-profiles.html
> with a view to agreeing with the proposal to request transition to CR2.
>
> This email is the call for consensus that begins the countdown timer on
> our decision policy: if no objection to requesting transition is received *by
> end of Friday 13th July* then the Resolution is passed and I will request
> the transition to CR2.
>
> The dates for deadline for comments and earliest PR in the SoTD were
> obtained from
> https://w3c.github.io/spec-releases/milestones/?cr=2018-07-26 : please
> review those dates as part of your review.
>
> For ease of reference the following pull requests were merged recently:
>
> Merged #413 Improve description of dependent features and links to
> feature definitions <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/413>
> Merged #412 Make TTML2 reference dated
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/412>
> Merged #396 Apply tt:initial to extension style properties
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/396>
> Merged #411 Add support for rh/rw <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/411>
> Merged #403 Add support for tts:rubyAlign='spaceAround'
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/403>
> Merged #408 Limit number of tts:textShadow <values> to 4
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/408>
> Merged #397 Apply tts:origin constraints to tts:position
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/397>
> Merged #406 Add tts:textShadow to HRM glyph definition
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/406>
> Merged #399 Relax <annotation-position> constraints
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/399>
> Merged #400 Apply workaround to <img> resize issue
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/400>
> Merged #395 Refactor features tables
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/395>
> Merged #398 Improve accessibility of table colours
> <https://github.com/w3c/imsc/pull/398>
>
> Kind regards,
>
> Nigel
>
>