Re: FPWD for ttml-imsc1

On Thu, Apr 24, 2014 at 1:03 AM, Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org> wrote:

> Pierre,
>
> One more thing,
>
> I have edited the Normative Section for [TTML1] reference
>
> changed from
>
> <dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">World Wide Web
> Consortium (W3C). Timed Text Markup Language 1 (TTML1) (Second Edition)
>
> to
>
> <dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt>
> <dd rel="dcterms:requires">Glenn Adams, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/
> ttml1/"><cite>Timed Text Markup Language 1 (TTML1) (Second
> Edition)</cite></a>, W3C Recommendation, 24 September 2013. URL: <a href="
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-ttml1-20130924/">http
> ://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-ttml1-20130924/</a></dd>
>

It would be better to change "Glenn Adams, " to read "Glenn Adams, Ed., ".

>
>
> Now for the broken fragment, looking at previous versions of your document
> I changed the code to:
>
>   <section id="recommended-character-sets">
>
>       <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span
> class="secno">5.2 </span>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to
> select from the sets of characters specified in
>
>       <a href="#recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language"
> class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span
> class="sec-title">Recommended
>             Character Sets</span></a> </section>
>
>
> The document as is is ready for publication.
> Let me know if it is OK.
>
> see
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/#
> recommended-character-sets
>
> Thierry
>
>
>
>
> On 24/04/2014 08:20, Thierry MICHEL wrote:
>
>> Pierre,
>>
>> Thanks for the fixes.
>> There is still broken fragment:
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/#
>> recommended-character-sets-1
>> (line 1180)
>>
>> the code is currently :
>>
>> <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading"
>> id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span class="secno">5.2
>> </span>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to select from the
>> sets of characters specified in <a
>> href="#recommended-character-sets-1"></a>
>>
>> 2 issues:
>>
>> a) should I change
>> href="#recommended-character-sets-1"
>> to
>> href="#recommended-character-sets"
>>
>> b) it seems the paragraph is missing some wording.
>>
>> Let me know.
>>
>> A part from this the document is ready for publication.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>>
>> Thierry
>>
>>
>> On 23/04/2014 23:49, Pierre-Anthony Lemieux wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Thierry,
>>>
>>> Thanks for the note.
>>>
>>> I have uploaded at [1] an updated draft intended to address the issues
>>> below.
>>>
>>> [1]
>>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-
>>> profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html
>>>
>>>
>>> The following URIs are namespaces URIs defined in the specification:
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc1/text
>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc1/image
>>>
>>> Based on [2], it sounds like they must resolve to namespace documents.
>>> If so, I have prepared the following namespace documents:
>>>
>>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-
>>> profiles/imsc-text-namespace.html
>>>
>>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/72855f154e4e/ttml-ww-
>>> profiles/imsc-image-namespace.html
>>>
>>>
>>> [2] http://www.w3.org/2005/07/13-nsuri
>>>
>>> Re: name of the main page, should Overview.html be used going forward?
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> -- Pierre
>>>
>>>
>>> On Thu, Apr 17, 2014 at 11:31 PM, Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Pierre,
>>>>
>>>> There are a few bugs in the document, which must be fixed. Please see
>>>> bellow.
>>>>
>>>> 1- HTML validation
>>>> there was an Error Line 679, Column 49: The width attribute on the col
>>>> element is obsolete. Must use CSS instead.
>>>>
>>>> <colgroup> <col span="1" width="25%"> <col span="1"> </colgroup>
>>>>
>>>> I have replaced using CSS as follows
>>>> <colgroup> <col span="1" style="width:25%"> <col span="1"> </colgroup>
>>>>
>>>> 2- CSS validation: OK
>>>>
>>>> 3- I have edited the SOTD section to have it Pubrules conformat
>>>>
>>>> 4- Links validation
>>>>
>>>> There are a few Broken fragments which MUST be fixed by yourself.
>>>>
>>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.
>>>> html#h3_ttp-aspectratio
>>>>
>>>> (lines 2302, 2305)
>>>>
>>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html#h3_ttp-
>>>> progressivelydecodable
>>>>
>>>> (lines 2291, 2294)
>>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.
>>>> html#h3_tts-forceddisplay
>>>>
>>>> (lines 2313, 2316)
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> 5- Namespace validation
>>>>
>>>> Error The Namespaces Checker was used for this test. The following is
>>>> a list
>>>> of URIs that might be (broken) namespace URIs. Note: If they are not
>>>> namespace URIs, please just let the Webmaster know in your publication
>>>> request.
>>>>
>>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc (1 occurrence)
>>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc/image (1 occurrence)
>>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>> http://www.w3.org/ns/ttml/profile/imsc/text (1 occurrence)
>>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>> http://www.smpte-ra.org/schemas/2052-1/2010/smpte-tt#image (5
>>>> occurrences)
>>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/ (1 occurrence)
>>>>      -> 404 (Not Found)
>>>>
>>>> These URI should be resolved.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> 6-The document is in its final destination, though it will need another
>>>> upload there, as there are changes to be added on your side.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140501/Overview.html
>>>>
>>>> Let me know when you are done.
>>>> you may want to edit the document from the above URI to saves my
>>>> changes.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>>
>>>> Thierry
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>
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