- From: Chris Lilley <chris@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 30 Oct 2013 17:03:22 +0100
- To: Philippe Le Hegaret <plh@w3.org>
- CC: public-tt <public-tt@w3.org>
Hello Philippe, Tuesday, October 29, 2013, 9:22:49 PM, you wrote: > -------- Forwarded Message -------- >> Subject: [IANA #711352] Request for MIME media type >> Application/Standards Tree - ttml+xml >> > Optional parameters : >> > charset >> >> > If specified, the charset parameter must match the XML encoding declaration, >> > or if absent, the actual encoding. See also encoding considerations. >> >> If this isn't going to change to simply say utf-8 or utf-16, then this >> needs to be a little clearer. >> >> Unlike the original version that was submitted, this doesn't actually >> state what the parameter means. I would suggest returning to an >> abbreviated form of the original text, and starting off with: >> >> Same as the charset parameter for the application/xml media type, as >> specified in RFC 3023. suggest "RFC 3023 or its successor" in line with similar text in other registrations. The successor recently finished last call at the IETF by the way. >> >> Then continue with the current text. >> >> Also, "if absent" is a little ambiguous. How about "if that is absent", >> making it clear that you're talking about the encoding declaration not >> being there. >> -- Best regards, Chris mailto:chris@w3.org
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