CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/var/tmp/cvs-serv42902

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
editorial fixes; removed unnecessary issue block and editorial note

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/04/28 00:50:42	1.150
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2015/05/25 00:45:28	1.151
@@ -298,7 +298,7 @@
     </section>
 
     <section id="collection">
-      <h3>Collect, Use, Share, Facilitate</h3>
+      <h3>Collect, Use, Share</h3>
 
       <p>A party <dfn>collects</dfn> data received in a network interaction if
       that data remains within the party’s control after the network
@@ -420,9 +420,6 @@
     <section id="third-party-compliance">
       <h3>Third Party Compliance</h3>
 
-      <p class="issue" data-number="203" title=
-      "Use of 'tracking' in third-party compliance"></p>
-
       <p>When a third party to a given user action receives a
       <code>DNT:1</code> signal in a related network interaction, that party
       MAY collect and use data about those network interactions when:</p>
@@ -724,11 +721,7 @@
         service providers. Those service providers which directly communicated with the user, for
         example, to deliver an ad, would use a tracking status value (<code>C</code>) and qualifier
         (<code>t</code>) to indicate to the user that consent had been received by another party.</p>
-      </aside>
-      
-      <p class="note">This section has been recently adapted from text formerly in the 
-      "Transfer of an exception to another third party" section of the TPE specification.
-      Feedback on this adaptation or the usefulness of this text is welcomed.</p>
+      </aside>      
     </section>
      
   </section>
@@ -773,14 +766,13 @@
     <p>This specification consists of input from many discussions within and
     around the W3C Tracking Protection Working Group, along with written
     contributions from Haakon Flage Bratsberg (Opera Software), Amy Colando
-    (Microsoft Corporation), Nick Doty (W3C), Roy T. Fielding (Adobe), Yianni
-    Lagos (Future of Privacy Forum), Tom Lowenthal (Mozilla), Ted Leung (The
-    Walt Disney Company), Jonathan Mayer (Stanford University), Ninja Marnau
-    (Invited Expert), Thomas Roessler (W3C), Matthias Schunter (IBM), Wendy
-    Seltzer (W3C), John M. Simpson (Invited Expert), Kevin G. Smith (Adobe),
-    Peter Swire (Invited Expert), Rob van Eijk (Invited Expert), David Wainberg
-    (Network Advertising Initiative), Rigo Wenning (W3C), and Shane Wiley
-    (Yahoo!).</p>
+    (Microsoft), Roy T. Fielding (Adobe), Yianni Lagos (Future of Privacy
+    Forum), Tom Lowenthal (Mozilla), Ted Leung (The Walt Disney Company),
+    Jonathan Mayer (Stanford University), Ninja Marnau (Invited Expert), Thomas
+    Roessler (W3C), Matthias Schunter (IBM), Wendy Seltzer (W3C), John M.
+    Simpson (Invited Expert), Kevin G. Smith (Adobe), Peter Swire (Invited
+    Expert), Rob van Eijk (Invited Expert), David Wainberg (Network Advertising
+    Initiative), Rigo Wenning (W3C), and Shane Wiley (Yahoo!).</p>
 
     <p>The DNT header field is based on the original Do Not Track submission by
     Jonathan Mayer (Stanford), Arvind Narayanan (Stanford), and Sid Stamm

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