- From: CVS User rfieldin <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 26 Mar 2014 03:56:10 +0000
- To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv6601
Modified Files:
tracking-dnt.html
Log Message:
(editorial) reduce unnecessary talk about third parties
--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html 2014/03/26 03:47:50 1.249
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html 2014/03/26 03:56:10 1.250
@@ -124,8 +124,7 @@
is using their site (audience segmentation). In some cases, the data
collected is used to dynamically adapt the content (personalization)
or the advertising presented to the user (targeted advertising).
- Data collection can occur both at the first-party site and via
- third-party providers through the insertion of tracking
+ Data collection often occurs through the insertion of tracking
elements on each page. A survey of these techniques and their
privacy implications can be found in [[KnowPrivacy]].
</p>
@@ -1339,9 +1338,7 @@
<p>
A key advantage of providing the tracking status at a resource
separate from the site's normal services is that the status can
- be accessed and reviewed prior to making use of those services
- and prior to making requests on third-party resources referenced
- by those services.
+ be accessed and reviewed prior to making use of those services.
</p>
<p>
A user agent MAY check the tracking status for a
Received on Wednesday, 26 March 2014 03:56:11 UTC