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CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

From: CVS User npdoty <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 10 Dec 2014 06:13:53 +0000
Message-Id: <E1XyaX3-0007tB-RX@gil.w3.org>
To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv30325

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
update Abstract and Scope, to bring up-to-date, use defined terms, and merge suggestions regarding issue-209

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2014/12/10 05:41:11	1.133
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2014/12/10 06:13:53	1.134
@@ -54,9 +54,8 @@
 <body>
   <section id="abstract">
     <p>
-      This specification defines the meaning of a Do Not Track (DNT)
-      preference and sets out practices for websites to comply with this
-      preference.
+	  This recommendation defines a set of practices for compliance with a user's
+	  Do Not Track (DNT) tracking preference to which a server may claim adherance.
     </p>
   </section>
   <section id="sotd">
@@ -66,12 +65,18 @@
   </section>
   <section id="scope-and-goals">
     <h2>Scope</h2>
-
-      <p>Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple preference expression
-      mechanism to allow or limit online tracking globally or selectively.</p>
-  	<p>The specification applies to compliance with requests through user agents
-  	that (1) can access the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that
-  	satisfies the requirements in <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3) and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted exception mechanism.</p>
+	<p>
+		Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple mechanism
+		to express a preference to allow or limit online <a>tracking</a>.
+		Complying with the user's preference as described in this document
+		includes limits on the collection, retention and use of data collected 
+		as a <a>third party</a> to <a title="user action">user actions</a>.
+	</p>
+  	<p>
+		This recommendation is intended for compliance with expressed user preferences
+		via <a title="user agent">user agents</a> that (1) can access the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that
+  	satisfies the requirements in <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3) and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted exception mechanism.
+	</p>
 		<p class="issue" data-number="209" title="Description of scope of specification"></p>
   </section>
 
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