CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv31465

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
editorial fixes to address issue-236

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2014/11/21 01:52:06	1.131
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2014/12/02 22:16:36	1.132
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
           <h5>No Personalization</h5>
           <p>
             A party that collects data for a permitted use MUST NOT use that data to alter a
-            specific user's online experience based on multi-site activity,
+            specific user's online experience based on tracking data,
             except as specifically permitted below.
           </p>
         </section>
@@ -417,9 +417,9 @@
 				Regardless of the tracking preference expressed, data MAY be collected, retained and used to limit
 				the number of times that a user sees a particular advertisement, often called
 				<dfn>frequency capping</dfn>, as long as the data retained do not reveal the user’s
-				browsing history. A party MUST NOT construct profiles of users or user behaviors based
-				on their ad frequency history, or otherwise alter the user’s experience.
-			</p></section>
+				browsing history.
+			</p>
+      </section>
 			
 			<section id="financial-logging">
 			<h4>Financial Logging</h4>

Received on Tuesday, 2 December 2014 22:16:37 UTC