- From: CVS User rfieldin <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2014 04:23:27 +0000
- To: public-tracking-commit@w3.org
Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv3902
Modified Files:
tracking-dnt.html
Log Message:
(editorial) reduce a bit of ambiguity in intro
--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html 2014/04/10 03:59:06 1.267
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html 2014/04/10 04:23:27 1.268
@@ -152,9 +152,9 @@
might be dependent on some forms of tracking and is unwilling or
unable to turn that off. In other cases, a server might perform only
limited forms of tracking that would be acceptable to most users.
- Servers need mechanisms to communicate how they behave with regard to
- tracking and to store user-granted exceptions after the user has
- made an informed choice.
+ Servers need mechanisms for communicating their tracking behavior and
+ for storing user-granted exceptions after the user has made an
+ informed choice.
</p>
<p>
This specification defines Hypertext Transfer Protocol [[!HTTP]]
Received on Thursday, 10 April 2014 04:23:28 UTC