CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv13473

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
revert non-editorial change, to be addressed through change proposal process instead; remove extraneous CSS

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2013/10/02 05:38:49	1.105
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2013/10/02 23:45:05	1.106
@@ -44,8 +44,6 @@
       }
     }
   </script>
-  <link rel="stylesheet" href="additional.css" type="text/css" media="screen"
-        title="custom formatting for TPWG editors">
 </head>
 <body>
   <section id="abstract">
@@ -59,10 +57,9 @@
   <section id="scope-and-goals">
     <h2>Scope</h2>
 
-    <p>Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple preference expression mechanism to allow or limit online tracking globally or selectively. <dfn>Tracking</dfn> is understood by this recommendation as the collection and retention of data across multiple parties' domains or services in such a form that it can be associated with a specific user, user agent, or device.</p>
-    <p class="issue" data-number="5" title="What is the definition of tracking?"></p>
-	<p>The specification applies to compliance with requests through user agents that (1) can access the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that satisfies the requirements in <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3) and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted exception mechanism.</p>
-	<p class="issue" data-number="209" title="Description of scope of specification"></p>
+      <p>Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple preference expression mechanism to allow or limit online tracking globally or selectively.</p>
+  	<p>The specification applies to compliance with requests through user agents that (1) can access the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that satisfies the requirements in <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3) and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted exception mechanism.</p>
+		<p class="issue" data-number="209" title="Description of scope of specification"></p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="definitions">
@@ -193,6 +190,16 @@
 			</ol>
 			<p class="issue" data-number="188" title="Definition of de-identified (or previously, unlinkable) data"></p>
 			</section>
+			<section id="tracking">
+				<h3>Tracking</h3>
+			<p>
+				<dfn>Tracking</dfn> is the retention or use, after a network
+         interaction is complete, of data that are, or can be,
+         associated with a specific user, user agent, or device.
+			</p>
+			<p class="issue" data-number="5" title="What is the definition of tracking?"></p>
+			<p class="issue" data-number="119" title="Specify 'not tracking' or 'None'">This draft does not specify any separate definition for "not tracking".</p>
+			</section>
 			<section id="collection">
 				<h3>Collect, Retain, Use, Share</h3>
         <p id="def-collection">
@@ -213,7 +220,6 @@
           receive or access that data.
 				</p>
 				<p class="issue" data-number="16" title="What does it mean to collect data? (caching, logging, storage, retention, accumulation, profile etc.)"></p>
-				<p class="issue" data-number="119" title="Specify 'not tracking' or 'None'">This draft does not specify any separate definition for "not tracking".</p>
 			</section>
 			<section id="graduated-response">
 				<h3>Graduated Response</h3>

Received on Wednesday, 2 October 2013 23:45:08 UTC