CVS WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts

Update of /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts
In directory gil:/tmp/cvs-serv9741

Modified Files:
	tracking-compliance.html 
Log Message:
use a version of the April Tracking definition, in the Scope section, as a workable interim; this does not change the group's decision regarding ISSUE-5, the definition of tracking

--- /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2013/09/28 22:30:05	1.103
+++ /w3ccvs/WWW/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html	2013/10/01 22:48:34	1.104
@@ -13,10 +13,11 @@
       //previousURI: "http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-tracking-compliance-20130430/",
       edDraftURI:  "http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-compliance.html", 
       editors:  [
-        { name: "Justin Brookman", url: "http://cdt.org/",
-          company: "CDT", companyURL: "http://cdt.org/" }, 
         { name: "Heather West", url: "http://Google.com/",
           company: "Google", companyURL: "http://google.com/" }, 
+        { name: "Justin Brookman", url: "http://cdt.org/",
+          company: "CDT", companyURL: "http://cdt.org/",
+          note: "until September 2013" }, 
         { name: "Sean Harvey", url: "http://google.com/",
           company: "Google", companyURL: "http://google.com/",
           note: "until June 2012" }, 
@@ -46,7 +47,8 @@
   <section id="scope-and-goals">
     <h2>Scope</h2>
 
-    <p>Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple preference expression mechanism to allow or limit online tracking globally or selectively.</p>
+    <p>Do Not Track is designed to provide users with a simple preference expression mechanism to allow or limit online tracking globally or selectively. <dfn>Tracking</dfn> is understood by this recommendation as the collection and retention of data across multiple parties' domains or services in such a form that it can be associated with a specific user, user agent, or device.</p>
+    <p class="issue" data-number="5" title="What is the definition of tracking?"></p>
 	<p>The specification applies to compliance with requests through user agents that (1) can access the general browsable Web; (2) have a user interface that satisfies the requirements in <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/tracking-protection/drafts/tracking-dnt.html#determining">Determining User Preference</a> in the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification; (3) and can implement all of the [[!TRACKING-DNT]] specification, including the mechanisms for communicating a tracking status, and the user-granted exception mechanism.</p>
 	<p class="issue" data-number="209" title="Description of scope of specification"></p>
   </section>
@@ -179,18 +181,6 @@
 			</ol>
 			<p class="issue" data-number="188" title="Definition of de-identified (or previously, unlinkable) data"></p>
 			</section>
-			
-			
-			<section id="tracking">
-				<h3>Tracking</h3>
-			<p>
-				<dfn>Tracking</dfn> is the retention or use, after a network
-         interaction is complete, of data that are, or can be,
-         associated with a specific user, user agent, or device.
-			</p>
-			<p class="issue" data-number="5" title="What is the definition of tracking?"></p>
-			<p class="issue" data-number="119" title="Specify 'not tracking' or 'None'"></p>
-			</section>
 			<section id="collection">
 				<h3>Collect, Retain, Use, Share</h3>
         <p id="def-collection">
@@ -211,6 +201,7 @@
           receive or access that data.
 				</p>
 				<p class="issue" data-number="16" title="What does it mean to collect data? (caching, logging, storage, retention, accumulation, profile etc.)"></p>
+				<p class="issue" data-number="119" title="Specify 'not tracking' or 'None'">This draft does not specify any separate definition for "not tracking".</p>
 			</section>
 			<section id="graduated-response">
 				<h3>Graduated Response</h3>
@@ -525,7 +516,7 @@
 	<section>
 	  <h3>Legal Compliance</h3>
 	  <p>
-	    Notwithstanding anything in this recommendation, parties may collect, use, share, and retain data required to comply with applicable laws, regulations, and judicial processes.
+	    Notwithstanding anything in this recommendation, parties MAY collect, use, share, and retain data required to comply with applicable laws, regulations, and judicial processes.
 	  </p>
 	</section>
   <section id="acknowledgements" class='appendix'>

Received on Tuesday, 1 October 2013 22:48:35 UTC