- From: Aaron Williamson <aaron@torekeland.com>
- Date: Thu, 15 May 2014 12:09:28 -0400
- To: public-tracking-comments@w3.org
I noticed a couple of typos in this document[1], one of which is substantive. 1) Section 5 ("Third Party Compliance"), says: Outside the permitted uses and explicitly-granted exceptions listed below, a third party to a given user action *MUST* collect, share, or associate with related network interactions any identifiers that identify a specific user, user agent, or device. For example, a third party that does not require unique user identifiers for one of the permitted uses *MUST NOT* place a unique identifier in cookies or other browser-based local storage mechanisms. I believe the first "MUST" is intended to be "MUST NOT." 2) In the definition of "Graduated Response" (2.13), the word "is" is missing: "A graduated response [is] a methodology..." Best, Aaron Williamson
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