- From: Lee Feigenbaum <feigenbl@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Thu, 28 Jun 2007 21:17:46 -0400
- To: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
- Cc: Dunja Ewinger <de@webxcerpt.com>, W3C SWEO IG <public-sweo-ig@w3.org>
Hi Ivan, Dunja, and SWEOids everywhere, I took a stab at wordsmithing the main paragraph of the 2nd case; it's up on the wiki page. Lee Ivan Herman wrote on 06/28/2007 05:03:28 AM: > Dunja, > > I hope you do not mind... I have copied the content of your text to a > separate wiki page, that makes it easier for people to edit or add their > own: > > http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/sweo/group/wiki/Semantic_Web_Flyer/Hotstories > > I still prefer the second use case of yours, but I tried to change the > text a little bit from an English point of view and, a little bit > shorter. Susie or another anglo-saxon should still run over the text... > > I have added my version to the same wiki page > > Thanks > > Ivan > > > Dunja Ewinger wrote: > > Dear all, > > > > attached you find some stories for the first page of the flyer. I am not > > sure whether they are suitable for the flyer. > > If you have a better "hot" story, please let me know! > > > > Best regards, > > Dunja > > > > -- > > Ivan Herman, W3C Semantic Web Activity Lead > URL: http://www.w3.org/People/Ivan/ > PGP Key: http://www.cwi.nl/%7Eivan/AboutMe/pgpkey.html > FOAF: http://www.ivan-herman.net/foaf.rdf
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