comment: RDF/A Primer 1.0 - English colloquialism

Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "RDF/A Primer 1.0"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-xhtml-rdfa-primer-20060310/
Mon, 13 Mar 2006 20:37:46 GMT
1st WD

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4 Beyond the Current Document

The above examples casually swept under the rug the issue of the RDF  
subject:
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-- RDF/A Primer 1.0
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-xhtml-rdfa-primer-20060310/#id68848
Mon, 13 Mar 2006 20:37:46 GMT

The expression "sweep under the rug" might not be understood by non  
native English speakers. I suggest to change it.




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