- From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 15 May 2006 12:19:19 +0900
- To: public-swbp-wg@w3.org
Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Best Practice Recipes for Publishing
RDF Vocabularies"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-swbp-vocab-pub-20060314/
Tue, 14 Mar 2006 12:48:26 GMT
1st WD
Often in the document, the editors are writing “this” like in
This recipe
This document
Please review the document to remove them as much as possible and
write directly about the content. It is often a question of rewriting
the paragraph in such way that it is obvious, the paragraph is about
this recipe or this document. I gave examples of rewriting in
previous comments.
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Karl Dubost - http://www.w3.org/People/karl/
W3C Conformance Manager, QA Activity Lead
QA Weblog - http://www.w3.org/QA/
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