- From: Booth, David (HP Software - Boston) <dbooth@hp.com>
- Date: Fri, 17 Mar 2006 17:04:21 -0500
- To: "Thomas Baker" <tbaker@tbaker.de>, "SW Best Practices" <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>
Those all sound like good ideas to me. (Though I'm not the one doing the editorial work they require!) David Booth > -----Original Message----- > From: public-swbp-wg-request@w3.org > [mailto:public-swbp-wg-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Thomas Baker > Sent: Friday, March 17, 2006 6:49 AM > To: SW Best Practices > Subject: [VM] Structure of the Cookbook > > > > On Fri, Mar 17, 2006 at 10:58:42AM +0100, Thomas Baker wrote: > > 3) "Title of Section 3" > > Currently called "Some considerations when choosing a URI > > namespace". David suggests: "Choosing a namespace URI: hash > > versus slash". > ... > > 8) Numbering of sections is requested. > > The body of the paper, with its unnumbered sections, is > currently structured as follows: > > Introduction > Apache configuration > URI Namespaces > Choosing a recipe > Content negotiation > Recipe 1 > . > Recipe 6 > Requirements [*] > > On re-reading this document with some distance, I find the > above sequence of material somewhat confusing and would like > to propose a different sequence, with somewhat different > section headings: > > Introduction > 1. Requirements [a] > 2. Content negotiation > Apache configuration [b] > 3. URIs for vocabularies, properties and classes [c] > Vocabularies that use a 'hash namespace' > Vocabularies that use a 'slash namespace' > Vocabularies that use other types of namespace > Choosing a namespace URI: hash versus slash [d] > 4. The recipes > Choosing a recipe [e] > -- Simple configuration > -- Extended configuration > Recipe 1 > . > Recipe 6 > > Comments > > [a] The Requirements section is where the assumptions > underlying the whole document are articulated, and in > its current location at the end of the document these > assumptions are somewhat lost. This section is not very > long -- it prints out at little more than one page. > I therefore propose we put it right after the Introduction. > > [b] Having read in the Requirements that one should be able > to get an RDF description (at a minimum) or possibly also > "human-readable" documentation, the reader wonders how > this can be done. The answer: "content negotiation". > The brief technical overview of Apache configuration for > Webmasters can follow here as a sub-section. > > [c] David Booth suggested "s/URI namespace/namespace URI/", and > the recent thread on hash namespace URIs [1] has revealed a > need to clarify the use of "namespace" and "vocabulary". I > suggest the slightly more verbose section title "URIs for > vocabularies, properties and classes". > > [d] As per David Booth's suggestion. > > [e] The recipes themselves should be grouped into a section, and it > seems logical to use the text on "choosing a recipe" as the > introduction to that section. > > Tom > > [1] > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-swbp-wg/2006Feb/thr ead.html#msg105 -- Dr. Thomas Baker baker@sub.uni-goettingen.de SUB - Goettingen State +49-551-39-3883 and University Library +49-30-8109-9027 Papendiek 14, 37073 Göttingen
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