[WN] Review of draft

Apologies, this got lost somehow.

Review of document :
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http://www.cs.vu.nl/~mark/wn/wn-conversion.html

Editor's draft, dated 17 Oct 2005

Reviewer : Benjamin Nguyen (INRIA) 
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General Comments :
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1- Maybe the document has evolved since then, and I have not used the 
latest version, in which case please disregard non relevant issues.

2- Abstract : Rewrite abstract in order to explain what the document is 
really about, in particular give a clear plan of the document, and whom it 
is supposed to address.

3- My feeling on the goal of the document is that the WN-TF was supposed 
to provide two results : (a) .the. result, i.e., WN converted to RDF/OWL 
and (b) guidelines on how the conversion took place, and why this specific 
conversion is better practise than the previous ones. (a) seems to be 
achieved, although I feel that a reference should be added (it appears in 
the text p4, but should also appear in appendix B : 
http://www.cs.vu.nl/~mark/wn.convertwn.pl, however (b) is not finalized. 

4- Section 4 should be improved with comments on decisions made by the TF, 
and justification on why this is Best Practises.

5- In Section 5, the authors question various parts of WN, which is fine, 
but does it have it.s place in this document ? Also, implementation 
decisions left loose in Section 5 should be decided upon.

6- As general feeling, the document is unfinished, many annotations, 
various .to-do.s need to be finalized, or decided, before the document can 
be accepted.


Have not reviewed in detail Appendix A.

Typos :
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Pages refer to the document, printed as is.

P2: Contents -> concersion to RDF/OWL -> conversion to RDF/Owl
P3: while still being intepretable -> interpretable
P3: (anti-)symmetry, inverseness -> unsure inverseness exists, replace ? 
Same goes for p5
P5: the same wordform as in French -> word form
P6: Use versuioning-specific -> versioning-specific
P7: Have to contact Princeton about chosing a base URI -> suppose this is 
not going to appear in final text, in any case : chosing -> choosing.
P13: [Unicersity of Neuchatel] -> [University of Neuchatel]


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