- From: Alan Rector <rector@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 09:30:05 +0100
- To: "McBride, Brian" <brian.mcbride@hp.com>
- Cc: Guus Schreiber <schreiber@cs.vu.nl>, Natasha Noy <noy@smi.stanford.edu>, best-practice <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <40D0050D.BAACCED0@cs.man.ac.uk>
All
Here is yet another revised version using Health rather than anything intrinsically quantitative as the quality and with, I hope, the other comments responded to. The diagrams seem bigger now here. I hope they come through for others. There remain some odd things with comments some of which have come out underlined instead of italicised in some browsers for reasons I haven't had time to dig into the HTML to spot.
Comments and touch ups please. I hope this can now go out as a first working draft.
Good luck.
Regards
Alan
"McBride, Brian" wrote:
> Summary: A few comments; figure 3 must be fixed but nothing else that should
> stand in the way of WD publication.
>
> 1. I'm a little nervous about not considering datatypes lest it have an
> impact on the other approaches. If the editors are happy the risk of this
> is small, than I'm happy.
>
> 2. Under General Issue it says
>
> [[
> 3. As datatypes. Data types will more usually be used when there is a
> literal, numeric or derived dfata types rather than when there is an
> enumerated list of values. They will not be considered further in this paper
> although a supplement may be issued.
> ]]
>
> I'm not clear what this means. Given the worked example is height, which
> normally has a numerical value, we should be clear there is no apparent
> inconsistency. Later it says that height means qualitative height, but this
> still feels awkward to me. An example which does not immediately conjour up
> qualitative values might be better. Other possible examples might be colour
> (though that risks getting caught up in the complexity of colour science) or
> severity. How about the severity levels associated with errors, e.g. the
> Java logging values. I'm not sure its worth the effort to change though.
>
> 3. Diagramming conventions
>
> I suppose we are aiming to have a common convention across all the notes.
>
> The diagrams are illegible in explorer on my machine, and only barely so in
> mozilla. Need some adjustment.
>
> 4. Caption on figure 2 is overlong.
>
> 5. n3 representation of variant 1. The comment makes the line too long.
>
> 6. representation of John's height: Suggest using a bnode rather than a
> named resource. Folks in the past have said that it is a pain to define
> URIs for these things.
>
> :Person
> a owl:Class.:John
> a :Person ;
> :has_height [a :tall] .
>
> My N3 is ropey, so I may have got that wrong, but hopefully my intent is
> clear. That is still in OWL DL, right?
>
> 7. Considerations using Pattern 1: consideration about anonymous values in
> database schema. Might be worth mentioning that RDF specific tools
> implemented on top of databases take care of this automatically.
>
> 8. Pattern 2, first para, type "tal".
>
> 9. Representation for pattern 2.
>
> This should include example instance data, e.g. for John.
>
> 10. In pattern 1 I wonder about attaching an rdf:value property to an
> instance of Tall_value to indicate the actual height. If I wondered about
> it, others will and might be worth saying whether or not it's a good idea.
>
> 11. I'm uncomfortable with Note1. It suggests dropping the caps for the
> name of class. Is that a good idea?
>
> 12. I'm concerned that the note promotes the tools used in its production
> too strongly. I'm uncomfortable with including stuff in the protégé/OWL
> format. I suggest Note 2 be turned into an acknowledgements section.
>
> Brian
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