- From: Alan Rector <rector@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 09:30:05 +0100
- To: "McBride, Brian" <brian.mcbride@hp.com>
- Cc: Guus Schreiber <schreiber@cs.vu.nl>, Natasha Noy <noy@smi.stanford.edu>, best-practice <public-swbp-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <40D0050D.BAACCED0@cs.man.ac.uk>
All Here is yet another revised version using Health rather than anything intrinsically quantitative as the quality and with, I hope, the other comments responded to. The diagrams seem bigger now here. I hope they come through for others. There remain some odd things with comments some of which have come out underlined instead of italicised in some browsers for reasons I haven't had time to dig into the HTML to spot. Comments and touch ups please. I hope this can now go out as a first working draft. Good luck. Regards Alan "McBride, Brian" wrote: > Summary: A few comments; figure 3 must be fixed but nothing else that should > stand in the way of WD publication. > > 1. I'm a little nervous about not considering datatypes lest it have an > impact on the other approaches. If the editors are happy the risk of this > is small, than I'm happy. > > 2. Under General Issue it says > > [[ > 3. As datatypes. Data types will more usually be used when there is a > literal, numeric or derived dfata types rather than when there is an > enumerated list of values. They will not be considered further in this paper > although a supplement may be issued. > ]] > > I'm not clear what this means. Given the worked example is height, which > normally has a numerical value, we should be clear there is no apparent > inconsistency. Later it says that height means qualitative height, but this > still feels awkward to me. An example which does not immediately conjour up > qualitative values might be better. Other possible examples might be colour > (though that risks getting caught up in the complexity of colour science) or > severity. How about the severity levels associated with errors, e.g. the > Java logging values. I'm not sure its worth the effort to change though. > > 3. Diagramming conventions > > I suppose we are aiming to have a common convention across all the notes. > > The diagrams are illegible in explorer on my machine, and only barely so in > mozilla. Need some adjustment. > > 4. Caption on figure 2 is overlong. > > 5. n3 representation of variant 1. The comment makes the line too long. > > 6. representation of John's height: Suggest using a bnode rather than a > named resource. Folks in the past have said that it is a pain to define > URIs for these things. > > :Person > a owl:Class.:John > a :Person ; > :has_height [a :tall] . > > My N3 is ropey, so I may have got that wrong, but hopefully my intent is > clear. That is still in OWL DL, right? > > 7. Considerations using Pattern 1: consideration about anonymous values in > database schema. Might be worth mentioning that RDF specific tools > implemented on top of databases take care of this automatically. > > 8. Pattern 2, first para, type "tal". > > 9. Representation for pattern 2. > > This should include example instance data, e.g. for John. > > 10. In pattern 1 I wonder about attaching an rdf:value property to an > instance of Tall_value to indicate the actual height. If I wondered about > it, others will and might be worth saying whether or not it's a good idea. > > 11. I'm uncomfortable with Note1. It suggests dropping the caps for the > name of class. Is that a good idea? > > 12. I'm concerned that the note promotes the tools used in its production > too strongly. I'm uncomfortable with including stuff in the protégé/OWL > format. I suggest Note 2 be turned into an acknowledgements section. > > Brian -- Alan L Rector Professor of Medical Informatics Department of Computer Science University of Manchester Manchester M13 9PL, UK TEL: +44-161-275-6188/6149/7183 FAX: +44-161-275-6236/6204 Room: 2.88a, Kilburn Building email: rector@cs.man.ac.uk web: www.cs.man.ac.uk/mig www.opengalen.org www.clinical-escience.org
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