- From: McBride, Brian <brian.mcbride@hp.com>
 - Date: Tue, 6 Jul 2004 18:29:50 +0100
 - To: public-swbp-wg@w3.org
 
I'm reviewing 
  http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/BestPractices/OEP/ClassesAsValues-20040623/
This gets a thumbs up to publish from me.  There are some policy issues for
the tc/wg to consider and some minor changes I'd recommend before
publication.  I'd be happy to leave the latter to the editor's discretion.
Brian
Policy Issues
=============
- referring to real services e.g. http://isbn.nu/ and real books
http://isbn.nu/0736809643
- including references to specific tools e.g.
http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/BestPractices/OEP/ClassesAsValues-20040623/books1.
owl  ends with
[[
<!-- Created with Protege (with OWL Plugin 1.1 beta, Build 126)
http://protege.stanford.edu -->]]
Also the xmlbase and default namespaces are defined in http://protege...
Including Owl abstract syntax.  Do we want to encourage proliferation of
another syntax?  Maybe its already in widespread use amongst ontologists.
Preferred changes before publication:
=====================================
Update open issues to remove concerns about dc:subject
Update open issues with wording specifically requesting feedback on
preferred option, e.g.
[[
Several DL compatible approaches are suggested in this document.  The WG
seeks to determine whether there is consensus on a preferred approach that
is DL compatible.  The WG therefore seeks input and feedback from the
community on this question.
]]
Update open issues to remove reference to "are approaches 2 and 4 the same".
I now think they are clearly different.
Quick fixes
===========
Typo, Abstract: ... 
Any restriction on using clashes as values ...
                         ^^^^^^^
Typo, Considerations when choosing Approch 4
 ... The subject of the book is a one or more ...
                               ^^^
Other Comments
==============
Dc:subject is hyperlinked to an RDFS document when the reader might expect
it to link to a human readable description of dc:subject.
My mozilla browser prints the figure in approach 2 twice, once distorted.
It appears ok when read on the screen.  And also in approach 5.  In both
cases the first occurrence of the figure is at the bottom of a page.
Mozilla bug, I suspect.
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