- From: Sergiu Dumitriu <sergiu@xwiki.com>
- Date: Mon, 24 Dec 2007 11:00:36 +0700
- To: public-svg-print@w3.org
> Hello, A few comments: - In section 3.3 of Part 1, "Master Page", the > wording of "if a rectangle was drawn prior to..." and of "If a > masterPage was specified after the rectangle was drawn" seems a bit > wrong, as the rectangle is not simply drawn. How about "if a rectangle > was declared prior to..." and "... after [displaying/printing/drawing] > the rectangle on the background for several pages..." - Still there, a > minor typo in the next paragraph: "it is good practice to have the > _objectsto_ be reused" - Section 3.5 of Part 1, "Selecting a Master > Page when referencing a page", says: ``The current Master Pages from > the externally referenced document may be applied to the externally > referenced page. In which case use-master-page= "external"''. The dot > doesn't belong there, that's not proper english. The same thing for > the next two phrases. - Still there, "Alternatively" makes the default > behavior look like a merely possible thing, not something enabled by > default. - Section 3.7 of Part 1, "noPrint", should be changed to > reflect the new name of the attribute used in Part 2, print-display. - > The diagram in section 3.9 of Part 1 is a bit too big, maybe a smaller > variant should be used inline, with a link to the big version. Also > consider adding a caption. P.S.: Just noticed the reply to my previous > comments, thanks for considering my previous observations. Regards, > Sergiu Dumitriu ... and of course a happy new year for all readers. Marco -- -- GoldED/386 2.42.G0614+ -- http://www.gadgetscout.org
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