Applied resolution for ISSUE-18 (ACTION-125)

I've applied the changes for ACTION-125 [1] / ISSUE-18 [2] as per the
proposal discussed in the Eric's email of 2009/10/26 [3].

The previous binding spec is available here:
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.html?rev=1.72&content-type=text/html&f=h

and the updated binding spec is here:
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.html?rev=1.73&content-type=text/html&f=h


Detail list of changes follows:
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Section 1.1:
In third bullet, replaced: "How SOAP over JMS uses the Uniform Resource
Identifier (URI) [IETF RFC 3986] specification for JMS endpoints [URI
Scheme for JMS]."

with:
"How SOAP over JMS uses the Uniform Resource Identifier (URI) [IETF RFC
3986] specification for JMS endpoints (JMS-URI)[URI Scheme for JMS]

Section 1.3:
In paragraph beginning "This document...", replaced "the Java Message
Service (JMS) [Java Message Service]" with "JMS")

Section 1.4.1:
In paragraph beginning "It is the intent...", replaced: "SOAP over Java
Message Service" with "SOAP/JMS"

Section 1.6:
In sentence beginning "A conforming implementation...", replaced "Java
Message Service (JMS) 1.1 [Java Message Service]" with "JMS"

In bullet 1, replaced "[URI Scheme for JMS]" with "the JMS-URI".

Section 2.2.4: - removed the sentence: "To conform to the latest
enhancements to support
internationalization, this specification references the [URI Scheme for
JMS]."

Section 2.4:- replaced: "Based on the sending node's use of SOAP 1.1 [SOAP
1.1], SOAP
1.2 [SOAP 1.2 Messaging Framework], SOAP Messages with Attachments [SOAP
Messages with Attachments], and MTOM [SOAP 1.1 Binding for MTOM 1.0]
[SOAP MTOM]" with "Based on the sending node's use of SOAP 1.1, SOAP 1.2,
SOAP Messages
with Attachments, and MTOM"

Section 2.5:- Replaced: "defined in section 6.2, Request-Response Message
Exchange
Pattern, [SOAP 1.2 Part 2: Adjuncts])" with "defined in Request-Response
Message Exchange Pattern" (kept link )

Section 2.6:
Replace: "The http://www.w3.org/2003/05/soap/mep/request-response/
message pattern is described in section 6.2, Request-Response Message
Exchange Pattern, [SOAP 1.2 Part 2: Adjuncts].

For binding instances conforming to this specification:"

with
"For binding instances using the
http://www.w3.org/2003/05/soap/mep/request-response/ message pattern:"

Note: The use of "may" in the two bullets in 2.6 has been change to
"can" (contrary to the original statement in this issue, it was not dealt
with in issue 15)

Section 2.6.1: - paragraph removed.

Section 2.6.2 - paragraph removed..

Section 2.7:- Replaced "The SOAP One-way MEP [SOAP 1.2 Part 3: One-Way MEP]
defines
..." with "The SOAP One-way MEP defines ..."

Section 3.1 - second paragraph, replaced: "the Java Message Service" with
"JMS"

Replaced "For information about accepted SOAP 1.2 bindings, see WSDL 1.1
for SOAP 1.2." with "For information about accepted SOAP 1.2 bindings,.
see [WSDL 1.1 for SOAP 1.2]." (Brackets added)

Section 3.4.1: Removed link from "The [WSDL 1.1] specification"

Section 3.4.5: Replaced: "the URI [URI Scheme for JMS]" with "the JMS-URI".

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This is a link to view the differences:
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.html.diff?r1=1.72&r2=1.73&f=h

...and this is a link to view the differences from the previous XML Spec
version:
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/2008/ws/soapjms/soapjms.xml.diff?r1=1.73&r2=1.74&f=h


[1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/soapjms/tracker/actions/125
[2] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/soapjms/tracker/issues/18
[3] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-soap-jms/2009Oct/0021.html

Regards
Mark

Received on Friday, 29 January 2010 18:50:01 UTC