RE: [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website

hi eric,

thanks, that's great!  i did a quick check and

> > •         in Q7, third bullet, 'Use of the
> > BioPortal<http://bioportal.bioontology.org/>or
> > OntoBee <http://www.ontobee.org/> for matching entities and their
> URIs.' is
> > a fragment, leave out the 'of' or elaborate briefly?

i noticed that the 'of' is still there?

cheers,
michael

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eric Prud'hommeaux [mailto:ericw3c@gmail.com] On Behalf Of Eric
> Prud'hommeaux
> Sent: Monday, December 03, 2012 8:12 AM
> To: Michael Miller
> Cc: Richard Boyce; M. Scott Marshall; Richard Boyce; HCLS
> Subject: RE: [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website
>
> Your points have been addressed in R1.7. I Also switched from the
> table image to an unordered list and rolled the caption into the
> preceding paragraph.
>
> Tx for precise edits and apologies for mixing edits in the same
> commit; kinda pressed for time.
>
>
> * Michael Miller <Michael.Miller@systemsbiology.org> [2012-11-29 09:20-
> 0800]
> > hi richard and scott,
> >
> >
> >
> > richard, thanks for your great work integrating everyone's contributions
> > into a coherent whole.  it reads nicely now.
> >
> >
> >
> > some very minor editing points:
> >
> > ·         section 2, the numbered list probably doesn't need to be
> > numbered
> > since the questions themselves are numbered
>
> done -- R1.7
>
> > ·         section 2, the second question in the numbered list is
> > incomplete: Q2: Are some relational schemas easier to make to RDF than
> > others and is a direct<http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-
> guide/#Q2>
>
> done -- R1.7
>
> > ·         in Q2, last paragraph, 'interLinked Data' is awkward, maybe no
> > caps or a hyphen?
>
> caps gone -- R1.7
> was probably the result of a search/replace with "Linked Data".
>
>
> > ·         Q6 ends with 'p>'
>
> done -- R1.7
>
>
> > ·         in Q7, third bullet, 'Use of the
> > BioPortal<http://bioportal.bioontology.org/>or
> > OntoBee <http://www.ontobee.org/> for matching entities and their
> URIs.' is
> > a fragment, leave out the 'of' or elaborate briefly?
>
> removed 'of' -- R1.7
>
>
> > ·         in Q10, 1st paragraph, 'such as on individual web pages for
> > resource' should be 'a resource'?
>
> 'such as on individual web pages for discrete resources' -- R1.7
>
>
> > ·         in Q11, 2nd paragraph, does '(see (Christian Bizer et al.
> > 2009)<http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/#refs>for
> > further details)'
> > need the outer parentheses?
>
> changed to '; see (Christian Bizer et al. 2009) for further details' --
> R1.7
> In principle, (see foo) is a common motif, and the doc is consistent about
> putting refs in parens, but it (did (indeed (look (weird)))).
>
> > ·         in Q11, Figure 2 caption, 'DbPedia' should be 'DBPedia' (it is
> > elsewhere)?
>
> done -- R1.7
> All other instances where capitolized as 'DBPedia'.
>
>
> > cheers,
> >
> > michael
> >
> >
> >
> > Michael Miller
> >
> > Software Engineer
> >
> > Institute for Systems Biology
> >
> >
> >
> > *From:* M. Scott Marshall [mailto:mscottmarshall@gmail.com]
> > *Sent:* Monday, November 26, 2012 7:53 AM
> > *To:* HCLS
> > *Cc:* Richard Boyce; Richard Boyce
> > *Subject:* [Linked Life Data] RDF Guide draft on W3C website
> >
> >
> >
> > Hi All,
> >
> >
> >
> > I cancelled the LLD task force teleconference due to lack of a pressing
> > agenda. I would like to pick it up again next Monday.
> >
> >
> >
> > We finally have an improved version of the RDF Guide W3C Interest Group
> > Note in HTML at:
> >
> > http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/hcls/notes/hcls-rdf-guide/
> >
> >
> >
> > There might very well be "version creep" due to multiple editors and
> > versions (journal article, corrections, improvements, updates) that were
> > synchronized to some extent.
> >
> >
> >
> > Please take a look at it send comments to Richard (CCd) and myself.
> Current
> > plan is to talk about it next Monday, possibly moving to ratify and
> > release.
> >
> >
> >
> > I look forward to seeing some of you at the SWAT4LS events in the coming
> > days in Paris:
> >
> > http://www.w3.org/wiki/HCLS/SWAT4LS2012/Hackathon
> >
> > http://www.swat4ls.org/workshops/paris2012/
> >
> >
> >
> > Note that we are planning to support remote participation at Wednesday's
> > hackathon so please contact me if you are interested and I will do my
> > best
> > to help you discover how to participate remotely.
> >
> >
> >
> > Cheers,
> >
> > Scott
> >
> >
> >
> > --
> > M. Scott Marshall, PhD
> > MAASTRO clinic, http://www.maastro.nl/en/1/
> > http://eurecaproject.eu/
> > https://plus.google.com/u/0/114642613065018821852/posts
> > http://www.linkedin.com/pub/m-scott-marshall/5/464/a22
>
> --
> -ericP

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