[presentation-api] Pull Request: Copy editing of non-normative text

mfoltzgoogle has just submitted a new pull request for https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api:

== Copy editing of non-normative text ==
Addresses Issue #345: Introduction could use come copy editing.

This updates the prose in the introduction to use more precise language and improve style.
It makes minor editing improvements to non-normative notes and the security and privacy section.
It also adds acknowledgements of registered trademarks used in the specification.


See https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/pull/429

Received on Thursday, 4 May 2017 01:38:19 UTC