[presentation-api] Introduction could use some copy editing

• From: Mark Foltz via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
• Date: Fri, 16 Sep 2016 22:29:41 +0000
• To: public-secondscreen@w3.org
• Message-ID: <issues.opened-177533238-1474064979-sysbot+gh@w3.org>

mfoltzgoogle has just created a new issue for 
https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api:

== Introduction could use some copy editing ==
The introduction could use a copy editing pass to improve phrasing and
 consistency.  This issue is an Editor's TODO to himself :)


Please view or discuss this issue at 
https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/issues/345 using your GitHub 
account

Received on Friday, 16 September 2016 22:29:49 UTC