- From: Anssi Kostiainen via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 05 Jun 2015 14:45:09 +0000
- To: public-secondscreen@w3.org
@mfoltzgoogle Thanks! [Some suggestions][1] for alternative wording for the "set of presentation" and related idioms used. I think it would be better to use human readable names in that section. To test how the updated idioms fit in, I [updated the Closing a PresentationSession][2] section to make use of the new idioms, I also attempted to simplify the algorithm on the same pass. Hopefully I did not introduce any bugs :-) If this style seems good and people think it improves the readability of the specification then feel free to merge my [PR][3] (rebased) and update the rest of the algorithms that refer to the "set of presentations" similarly to the new style (that would be the sections on starting and joining). [1]: https://github.com/anssiko/presentation-api/commit/ca2a5cb7dc50097b7f33bc5e62ddb534252b9739 [2]: https://github.com/anssiko/presentation-api/commit/3cca40ad2dd2837099a5369f24b3724ee5b8c2e3 [3]: https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/pull/105 -- GitHub Notif of comment by anssiko See https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/pull/100#issuecomment-109315891
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