Feedback on Second Screen

Some quick comments on Second Screen [1]
(comments likely apply more than once).

> If the presentation message type is text, then initialize event's data attribute to the contents of presentation message data of type DOMString.
> If the presentation message type is binary, and binaryType is set to blob, then initialise [sp] event's data attribute to a new Blob object that represents presentation message data as its raw data.

-ize (as in the previous line...)

> The mechanism used to monitor presention [sp] displays availability and determine the compatibility of a presentation display with a given URL is left to the user agent.

> The term DOMException is defined in [WEBIDL].

> This document provides interface definitions using the [WEBIDL] standard.
a bit late, no?
> The terms Promise, ArrayBuffer, and ArrayBufferView are defined in [WEBIDL].


>    // as soon as it's not needed.

i favor `it isn't`

>    // available for simplicity (one could implement the third state for the button).

the third => a third





[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/presentation-api/

Received on Wednesday, 26 August 2015 03:22:07 UTC