[presentation-api] Pull Request: Grammatical correction from Hongki CHA via GitHub on 2015-04-06 (public-secondscreen@w3.org from April 2015)

From: Hongki CHA via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 06 Apr 2015 15:08:47 +0000
To: public-secondscreen@w3.org
Message-ID: <pull_request.opened-32684320-1428332925-sysbot+gh@w3.org>

hongkicha has just submitted a new pull request for 
https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api:

== Grammatical correction ==
Hi, I've just corrected some grammatical errors from the beginning of 
the document until Part 5.

These errors include tangling modifiers, repetitive words, incorrect 
punctuation, unnecessary passive voice, inappropriate articles and so 
on.

Cheers.


See https://github.com/w3c/presentation-api/pull/73

Received on Monday, 6 April 2015 15:09:00 UTC