RE: ACTION-219

Hi Allen and all,

This is indeed an intuitive way for authors and readers because,
by taking such a snapshot, you make clear which version you are
referring to.

I've started to incorporate some of your suggestions, as well as
updating the DTDs (Comments [AG7] and [AG22]).

Thanks much,
Harold


-----Original Message-----
From: Ginsberg, Allen [mailto:AGINSBERG@imc.mitre.org] 
Sent: Thursday, February 08, 2007 3:24 PM
To: public-rif-wg@w3.org
Cc: Boley, Harold; Michael Kifer
Subject: ACTION-219

Hi all,

I  have completed ACTION-219 "Review CORE WD by next week."

Logistically,  I found it easier to edit and comment on the document
directly, so  here is what I did.  First I created a version using
Sandro's tool.  I edited that version in a well-known software product
using a "track changes feature" and comments tool.  I then coverted the
result to a pdf file which I uploaded and can be accessed from the
FrontPage of the Wiki (or by using the following:
http://www.w3.org/2005/rules/wg/wiki/FrontPage?action=AttachFile&do=get
&target=coreRev-AG.pdf).  Hopefully this is an intuitive way for the
authors to see feedback and also not too much of a hassle for other
readers to follow. I may have additional comments to make before the
next telecon but I wanted to get these out now.

Allen

Received on Friday, 9 February 2007 02:51:51 UTC