Re: Grammar in RDFa 1.1 Primer ("it is a good advise")

Dan,

thank you. I have made the change in my working copy on my machine; this will be updated when we release a second version of the note.

Ivan

On Apr 8, 2013, at 10:05 , Dan Scott <dan@coffeecode.net> wrote:

> While reading through the RDFa 1.1 Primer published at
> http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml-rdfa-primer/, I noticed that the note in
> section 2.2.4 "Alternative for setting the property: rel" contains the
> following sentence:
> 
> "In general, it is a good advise to stay with property, when possible."
> 
> This is grammatically incorrect. "stay with" is a bit of a
> colloquialism, as well, whereas "use" is clear and direct. If changing
> as little as possible in the existing text is a goal, I suggest either:
> 
> "In general, it is good advice to use property, when possible."
> 
> or:
> 
> "In general, it is advised to use property, when possible."
> 
> Thanks,
> Dan Scott


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