Re: RDF 1.1 XML Syntax

On 18-12-13 09:33, Ivan Herman wrote:
> Guus,
>
> I have reviewed the draft (thanks for the diff file, it was a major
> help in this case to concentrate on what really counts at this
> step...). I have found only minor issues, listed below. Modulo
> handling those, I am o.k. publishing the document as a PER.
>
> If you agree with the changes I propose on the two SVG files, I am
> happy to do the required changes and push them up to mercurial.

Great, thanks!
Guus

>
> Ivan
>
> Here are my comments:
>
> - Introduction, second paragraph, very end, a full stop is missing.
>
> - The figure captions all have a "(SVG Version)" note, but those are
> not active links. I guess the links were accidentally removed. The
> SVG figures should be copied and the links put back. Note, b.t.w.,
> that the SVG files themselves (I looked at the original) have all the
> same stupid error that many illustrations have: they set the width
> and the height explicitly, which means that they do not scale (which,
> for a scalable vector graphic illustration is sort of funny).
> Instead, @viewPort should be used for all.
>
> - I think the two notes at the top of 5.1 can be removed. They refer
> to a difference with the pre-2004 version, that is now moot...
>
> - Section 8: add the fact that rdf:HTML datatype cannot be
> represented in RDF/XML either.
>
> - C.1 last entry: "cater for non-normative" -> "cater for the
> non-normative"
>
> - I think appendix C.2 can be removed altogether ("Revisions since
> Draft 10 of October 2003")
>
> - D.1., normative references: - change the RDF Schema reference to
> the PER - (hopefully) TRIG and Turtle will be PR's by then - RDF11-MT
> and RDF11 concepts will have to be updated to PR
>
> - D.2., informative references: - I am not sure why XPAth is
> informative; with its usage in the XML Literal part it may have to be
> normative. In any case, we use XPATH 3, ie, the reference must be
> updated to: http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/PR-xpath-30-20131022/
>
>
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> On 17 Dec 2013, at 17:19 , Guus Schreiber <guus.schreiber@vu.nl>
> wrote:
>
>> Ivan,
>>
>> The draft with Gavin's proposed adaptation of XMLLiteral handling
>> (see Sec. 7.2.17) is now available at:
>>
>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/default/rdf-xml/index.html
>>
>> The diff with the 2004 version is here (also linked from the
>> document preamble):
>>
>> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/rdf/raw-file/default/rdf-xml/diff.html
>>
>> It would be great if you could have a look at it before the
>> telecon. Sorry for the short notice!
>>
>> Guus
>>
>>
>>
>
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