RE: new editor's draft of Primer

Michael,

> + Is there deliberately no reference to the 
> RDFa use cases document [1] in the Primer?

No deliberate act there. I've added a reference in Section 1.

> + I tried to run the Primer through the pubrule
> checker [2] - it fails. Maybe to early?

Too early, but good to know that we'll need to double-check that.

> + There are still now and then terms used in
> the Primer (as 'web') that should be written 
> according to [3]

fixed "web", I don't see other terms for now, but let me know if you
find others.

> + The 'Changes' section should be at the very bottom
> of the document (IMHO this is good practice, but 
> no strict requirement)

done.

> + Minor editorial issues (typos, etc.):
> 
>  - Sec. 2.2, second-last paragraph 'etc...'

I believe that would be correct in French (and likely German?), but in
English, etc. is not followed by an ellipsis, as far as I understand.

If someone wants to correct me on that, happy to :)

>  - Heading of sec. 3 currently reads 
>    '3 Advanced Concepts: Custom Vocabularies, Document Fragments,
> Complex Data, ...'
>    Can we find a more concise title, here?

Let met know if you can find one :)

>  - In sec. 5 there is a link to rdfa.info (case studies).
>    Could we also link to the (already with existing content)
>    http://rdfa.info/rdfa-in-the-wild/?

I'd rather not have too many links to internal pages, just in case we
re-organize rdfa.info at some point.

-Ben

Received on Wednesday, 10 October 2007 20:53:34 UTC