- From: Guus Schreiber <guus.schreiber@vu.nl>
- Date: Sun, 9 Mar 2014 19:14:07 +0000
- To: Shuji Kamitsuna <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp>
- CC: Sandro Hawke <sandro@w3.org>, Gregg Kellogg <gregg@greggkellogg.net>, "Ivan Herman" <ivan@w3.org>, "public-rdf-comments@w3.org" <public-rdf-comments@w3.org>
Dear Shuji Kamitsuna, We have marked your comment as an erratum [1]. Thanks for letting us know, and also for translating the Primer! Best, Guus [1] https://www.w3.org/2001/sw/wiki/RDF1.1_Errata#erratum_2 On 09-03-14 18:41, Sandro Hawke wrote: > On 03/09/2014 12:37 PM, Gregg Kellogg wrote: >> On Mar 9, 2014, at 9:56 AM, Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org> wrote: >>> Dear Kamitsuna-san, >>> >>> this is an English idiomatic expression that, afaik, is perfectly >>> fine (I am not native English either, but I do believe it is fine). A >>> more verbose version would be something like: >>> >>> "Subsequently we discuss TriG, which is an extension of Turtle, and >>> N-Quads, which is an extensions of N-Triples, to encode multiple >>> graphs." >> As a native speaker, I do fine the original text awkward. > > Huh. As another native speaker, I'd say the original is completely > nonsense. I had no idea what it meant. > >> I'd suggest of the following: >> >> "Subsequently we discuss TriG and N-Quads, which are extensions of >> Turtle and N-Triples, respectively, to encode multiple graphs." > > Ah, that makes perfect sense, and I guess that's what the original was > supposed to say. > > >> "Subsequently we discuss TriG and N-Quads, which are extensions >> respectively of Turtle and N-Triples to encode multiple graphs." > > Yes, that also makes sense. > > Ivan's phrasing also kind of makes sense, but it's ambiguous about > whether TriG is about multiple graphs. > > > -- Sandro >> I'm not thrilled with either, however. >> >> Gregg >> >>> Sincerely >>> >>> Ivan >>> >>>> On 09 Mar 2014, at 14:48 , Shuji Kamitsuna >>>> <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hello. >>>> >>>> This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan. >>>> >>>> I'm translating "RDF 1.1 Primer" into Japanese. >>>> I encountered a sentence that I cannot understand. >>>> >>>> It is on the section 5.1 "Turtle family of RDF languages", which says >>>> "Subsequently we discuss TriG and N-Quads, which are extensions of >>>> Turtle respectively N-Triples to encode multiple graphs." >>>> >>>> What does it stand for? /OR/ Is there any error in the description? >>>> >>>> Best regards, >>>> -- >>>> ******************* >>>> KAMITSUNA, Shuji. >>>> >>>> ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp >>>> http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/ >>> >>> ---- >>> Ivan Herman, W3C >>> Digital Publishing Activity Lead >>> Home: http://www.w3.org/People/Ivan/ >>> mobile: +31-641044153 >>> GPG: 0x343F1A3D >>> FOAF: http://www.ivan-herman.net/foaf >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >> > >
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