Re: review PRs for CEPC

> I have asked Nigel to clarify some of the points made in PR #33 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/33.

I reviewed this and my unresolved comments on the pull request are fairly straightforward and don’t need more clarification: I can’t address them directly myself because the pull request is from a branch in Chaals’s fork. I’ve prompted Chaals to make the changes to his branch, which is the source of PR #33, to resolve those comments. (I had to mark some comments as unresolved because no action had been taken to resolve them - I’m not sure why they were marked as resolved)

It’s hard to trace but I think this pull request itself was made in an effort to resolve Chaals’s comments made on https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/27 which was merged – I made no comments on that pull request.

The other outstanding comment that is the reason Tzviya assigned this to me, I think, is https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/33#discussion_r269623322 concerning minimising the harm – I moved this comment to the related issue #34: https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/issues/34 and Tzviya marked it as resolved. I suggest that we deal with that issue by itself, with any proposal being an expansion or replacement of the changes made in #33, once that has been merged, or as a new section if #33 is not merged.

In summary, the actions are:

  1.  Chaals to change his branch to address the unresolved review comments
  2.  PWETF to consider #3 and #34 for addressing the process to be followed

Kind regards,

Nigel


From: "Siegman, Tzviya" <tsiegman@wiley.com<mailto:tsiegman@wiley.com>>
Date: Tuesday, 18 June 2019 at 20:15
To: "public-pwe@w3.org<mailto:public-pwe@w3.org>" <public-pwe@w3.org<mailto:public-pwe@w3.org>>
Subject: review PRs for CEPC
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Resent-Date: Tuesday, 18 June 2019 at 20:15

Hi PWE,

We are working on finalizing our edits to the draft CEPC that we will put toward the Team and AC for wide review.

I have made some minor edits to PR #49 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/49.

Ada will be making some edits to #46 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/46.

I have asked Nigel to clarify some of the points made in PR #33 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/33.

Ralph is working on a detail in PR #51 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/51.

PR 54 https://github.com/w3c/PWETF/pull/54 indicates that the glossary will be edited later.

Please submit your comments and feedback about the whole document by 27 June so that Ada and An Qi can clean up the document and circulate it.

Thank you,
Tzviya

Tzviya Siegman
Information Standards Lead
Wiley
201-748-6884
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