- From: Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
- Date: Sat, 1 May 2021 02:16:45 -0400
- To: public-pronunciation@w3.org
Colleagues: It pains me to write this, because I know how eager we are to get on to publication and the steps beyond. I do think we're very close, but not quite there. Short Version: We have all the pieces--but not in the right order, imo. Longer Version ... * Item: Please recall Michael's comments suggesting a comparison of the two approaches as an introduction to those approaches. We have this overview, but it's Section 4. Suggestion: Move it to Section 2. Then what is currently 2, can become 3, and 3 can become 4. * Item: I wonder if we've placed the Poe too high each time. Might * it make more sense to introduce the particular pieces of we're * adopting first? Then, present the Poe as the last example as a * subsection called something like: "Comprehensive Application" or * "Tieing it all together." Does this make sense? I think it would make a smoother read. Best, Janina -- Janina Sajka https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka Linux Foundation Fellow Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup: http://a11y.org The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
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