Re: Edit Work

Hi Paul,

Thanks for the edits.  I just gave it a fast read, and see a few things that might be tweaked. Overall, though, looks good!  Unfortunately I’m still trying to wrap up work this evening on my to do list from Wednesday, but will should have time for this tomorrow or Sunday.

I still like the idea of the table, but agree we could let it go if it will delay this further, meaning it may take longer than expected to make it work in terms of details and accessibility.

Mark

From: Paul Grenier <pgrenier@gmail.com>
Date: Friday, April 23, 2021 at 6:59 PM
To: Pronunciation Task Force <public-pronunciation@w3.org>
Subject: Edit Work
Resent-From: <public-pronunciation@w3.org>
Resent-Date: Friday, April 23, 2021 at 6:58 PM

I've done a round of edits on the doc (PR here<https://nam10.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fw3c%2Fpronunciation%2Fpull%2F82&data=04%7C01%7Cmhakkinen%40ets.org%7C8cc6efa0c4e04abc1f0f08d906ab65e9%7C0ba6e9b760b34fae92f37e6ddd9e9b65%7C0%7C0%7C637548155493854952%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=spS5vT4tfKKOlw%2BpEHB2eZWF71xvVCYB7WpU0zAYtlM%3D&reserved=0>).

I have time this weekend if anyone else has time to read it over and offer suggestions. I'm still missing the "Table" Dee suggested but it's possible we don't need it right now. It just sounded like a cool idea.

Thanks,
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