Comments on Grouping of Resources

1: Note the example

is illegal, in that it does not conform with HTTP spec which does not 
allow username and password. Also the :mypasswd syntax is strongly 
discouraged in RFC 3986

2: Typo

3: includeHosts
You seem to mean that includeHosts with also includes - in a quick skim I didn't see this stated explicitly, 
or for example that it does not include or whatever; nor 
what to do if you only want and not

4: I found example 4.6 I had to think fairly hard. If this is a standard 
idiom then it may be worth spelling it out a bit.

"all resources on except those on shot in 
widescreen format."
which is
"all resources on except those on, and
all resources on except those shot in widescreen format."

5. The SHOULD under 4.7 is way too strong. I see no reason why the 
expression in 4.7 cannot be implemented efficiently and be generally 
useful; setting the expectation that Powder won't work well is not a 
good idea


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Received on Wednesday, 1 August 2007 10:19:15 UTC