- From: Renato Iannella via GitHub <sysbot+gh@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2018 11:41:16 +0000
- To: public-poe-archives@w3.org
riannella has just created a new issue for https://github.com/w3c/poe:
== Small typos ==
Typos found via the Japanese translation:
On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 7:45 PM, 上綱秀治 <ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp> wrote:
Dear Sir and Madam
This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.
"ODRL Information Model 2.2" in Japanese is available now.
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html
Thank you for the great specification!
I found some possible typos below.
Sec. 2.2.1, 2nd. Example Use Case:
"ttp://example.com/odrl:profile:03" must be "http://example.com/odrl:profile:03" - The initial "h" is missing.
Sec. 2.2.2, Example Use Case:
"can my indexed" might be "can be indexed".
Sec. 2.3.1, in the explanation of "assignee":
"the of Rule" might be "of the Rule".
Sec. 2.5.3:
"all of the the" must be "all of the" - "the" is doubled.
Sec. 2.6.4, 2nd. Example Use Case:
"assigner MUST now also compensate" - Could "assigner" be "assinee"?
Best Regards,
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KAMITSUNA, Shuji.
ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/
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