Re: [poe] 1.4 Terminology

@riannella Comments:

1) The definition for agreement is formulated in an unclear manner, it should be in singular form and I find it too strong (talking about contracts and licenses).  

> Agreement: a) Policy expressions that are formal contracts (licenses) stipulating all the terms of usage and all the parties involved.

Also Assertion is plural, whereas Offer singular. 

2) Article. Some definitions have it, some not. 

> Offer: Policy expression that proposes terms of usage from an Asset owner.

vs

> Asset:  An identifiable resource that is the subject of a Rule.

3) Some of the elements are defined by their use. 

> Undefined Term: Is used to indicate how to support Actions that are not part of any vocabulary or profile in the policy expression system.

We might define them instead as:

> Undefined Term: Class of Actions that are not part of any vocabulary or profile in the policy expression system.



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