Comments on Personalization Semantics Explainer 1.0 WD 18.10.2018

Dear APA WG,

Below are two comments on the current Comments on Personalization
Semantics Explainer 1.0 working draft.

Substantive comment:

* Definition of "Relationship"
<https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-1.0/#dfn-relationships>:
What I miss in this definition is whether this connection needs to be
programmatic or programmatically determinable. Otherwise it can
encompass visual relationships, especially those suggested through
proximity and visual similarity.

 Editorial comment:

* Definition of "Expose"
<https://www.w3.org/TR/personalization-semantics-1.0/#dfn-expose>:
"Translated" -> "Translate".

Best regards,

Christophe Strobbe

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Christophe Strobbe
Akademischer Mitarbeiter
Responsive Media Experience Research Group (REMEX)
Hochschule der Medien
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70569 Stuttgart
Tel. +49 711 8923 2749

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Received on Tuesday, 23 October 2018 17:04:44 UTC