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Re: Editorial updates to explainer.html

From: lisa.seeman <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>
Date: Mon, 12 Feb 2018 19:02:48 +0200
To: Sharon D Snider <snidersd@us.ibm.com>
Cc: <public-personalization-tf@w3.org>
Message-Id: <1618af639bf.db2a0e5f106249.8344192218252033816@zoho.com>
These all look correct.

All the best

Lisa Seeman

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---- On Mon, 12 Feb 2018 17:34:57 +0200 Sharon D Snider&lt;snidersd@us.ibm.com&gt; wrote ---- 

Hi all,
  
 I have a few editorial changes that I would like to push to GitHub, but before I do, I'd like to confirm the following edits will not change the meaning:
  
 1.1 Why We Need Personalization &gt; after the bullets, the second chapter: 
      
       change “imply F1 help” be “apply F1 help”
 1.1 Why We Need Personalization &gt; last chapter:
       change “peoples language”  to “an individuals language”
       change “subject to copy write” to “subject to copyright”
       change “apps and AT” to “applications and assistive technologies”
 A.2.1 Additional WAI-ARIA Roles &gt; 3rd sentence:
       change “Nav maps can be automatically generated“ to “Navigation maps can be automatically generated”
 A.4 RDFa &gt; second paragraph:
        change “coga work needs to be usable by as many authors as possible” to
        “personalization semantics need to be usable by as many authors as possible"

 Please advise.
  
 Thank you,
 Sharon Snider
IBM Research ► IBM Accessibility
(512)965-3957
www.ibm.com/able and w3.ibm.com/able
 




 
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