- From: Jie Bao <baojie@gmail.com>
- Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2009 15:41:38 -0400
- To: Antoine Zimmermann <antoine.zimmermann@deri.org>
- Cc: Sandro Hawke <sandro@w3.org>, W3C OWL Working Group <public-owl-wg@w3.org>, Axel Polleres <axel.polleres@deri.org>
Antoine: Thanks Sandro: can we edit the wiki now? Jie On Tue, Apr 21, 2009 at 3:37 PM, Antoine Zimmermann <antoine.zimmermann@deri.org> wrote: > I have very minor comments on rdf:text, no reason to postpone publication. > > Sandro Hawke wrote: >> >> A new set of snapshots: >> >> linked from: >> [...] >> http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-rdf-text-20090420/ > > Sect.1: "text in various different languages" -> "text in various languages" > or "text in different languages". > > > The special bracket characters used to write a pair ( F , v ) take 3 times > as much vertical space as any other character (in Firefox 3.0.8) or are > replaced by squares (in IE 7.0.5730.11). > > However, in the Structural Specification document, the special brackets are > displayed correctly in Firefox (but still replaced by squares in IE). > The differences between rdf:text and SS&FS are: > > In rdf:text, the code is: > <span class="name">⟨ F v ⟩</span> > > and the CSS says that: > > .name { > font-family: monospace; > } > > In SS&FS, the code is: > ⟨ <i>F</i> <i>v</i> ⟩ > > Couldn't we just use normal brackets for all tuples in all documents? This > would also make things more consistent, since sometimes tuples are > represented with normal brackets, sometimes with angle brackets. BTW, it is > a rather standard practice to use normal brackets to write tuples in > mathematics. > > > Sect.4, last parag.: > "an RDF tool that suports rdf:text MUST ..." -> "an RDF tool that supports > rdf:text MUST ..." > > "(normative or nonnormative)" compare in the header "in these non-normative > formats: PDF version". Shouldn't the word "non-normative/nonnormative" > normalized throughout the documents? > I noticed that both spelling are used in almost all OWL 2 documents. > > > Sect.5.3.2: > "a sequence of length 0 or 1 of type rdf:texts" -> "... of type rdf:text" > > Regards, > -- > Antoine Zimmermann > Post-doctoral researcher at: > Digital Enterprise Research Institute > National University of Ireland, Galway > IDA Business Park > Lower Dangan > Galway, Ireland > antoine.zimmermann@deri.org > http://zimmer.aprilfoolsreview.com/ > > -- Jie Bao http://www.cs.rpi.edu/~baojie Facebook,Twitter,Skype,Msn,LinkedIn - check url above
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