- From: Antoine Zimmermann <antoine.zimmermann@deri.org>
- Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2009 12:23:28 +0100
- To: Sandro Hawke <sandro@w3.org>
- CC: public-owl-wg@w3.org
Sandro Hawke wrote: > A new set of snapshots: > > linked from: > http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/draft/ED-owl2-overview-20090420/ > [...] The Overview looks good. > Please let me know if you see any show-stopping errors, and I'll try to > get them in before publishing tomorrow. Minor things like typos or > improved wording can wait for the next round. Here is already some typos to correct for next round: In Sect.3 of Doc. Overview, 2nd parag. "see Section 5.2 of OWL 2 New Features and Rationale" should be "see Section 4.2 of OWL 2 New Features and Rationale". OWL is always mentioned with the version appended to it (OWL 1, OWL 1 DL/Full, OWL 2, OWL 2 EL/QL/RL/DL/Full) except in the phrase "some of the restrictions applicable to OWL DL have been relaxed". I don't mind this sentence, but was it intentional? In the table of Sect.4, "Profiles defines three sub-languages of OWL 2 that ...": shouldn't it be "Profiles defines three sub-languages of OWL 2 DL that ..."? "... in particular applications scenarios." -> "... in particular application scenarios." Regards, -- Antoine Zimmermann Post-doctoral researcher at: Digital Enterprise Research Institute National University of Ireland, Galway IDA Business Park Lower Dangan Galway, Ireland antoine.zimmermann@deri.org http://zimmer.aprilfoolsreview.com/
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