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Difficult-to-parse sentence

From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 7 Dec 2015 11:07:37 +0100
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To: public-ole-comment@w3.org
Is the following sentence correct in English?

"Other similar models, languages, and terms will also be considered by the Working Group through the additional Use Cases and Requirements collected and analyzed."

It may be, but it is a bit difficult to parse for a non-English. Suggested rewrite (with Franco-Hungarian dialect of English):

"Other similar models, languages, and terms will also be considered by the Working Group based on the analysis of additional Use Cases and Requirements that the group will collect."

But I yield to anglo-saxons…:-)

Ivan

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