- From: Dmitri Silaev <Dmitri.Silaev@Sun.COM>
- Date: Mon, 14 Dec 2009 19:58:24 +0300
- To: Dominique Hazael-Massieux <dom@w3.org>
- Cc: public-mwts@w3.org, marcosc <marcosc@opera.com>, Robin Berjon <robin@robineko.com>
Hi Dom, Here is my comments for "Extracting Test Assertions from a Specification" document. The document looks very good. I have only minor comments. I. "3. Mark-up conventions for test assertions" "Each assertion is uniquely identified through the id attribute on the paragraph element; the unique identifier starts by convention with ta-, and its uniqueness is ensured by the HTML validity requirements of the document." Is it useful to explain the best practice how to get the assertion the unique assertion id? For example, "its uniqueness generated randomly is ensured..." It saves reader from solving the riddle what "RRZxvvTFHx" means. II. "4. Extracting automatically test assertions" "The original extraction of test assertions was made through an XSLT style sheet, that allowed to generate a static list of test assertions that served as the first basis for the review of the testability of the specification." I believe it need to be explained where the extraction was made, e.g. "When "Widgets Packaging and Configuration" specification was marked up by convention said before, the original extraction of test assertions was made through an XSLT style sheet,..." III. "5. Test assertions and test cases" "To maintain the association between test cases and test assertions, a simple XML file was set up: <EXAMPLE>" It seems the example should match to marked assertion in "3. Mark-up conventions for test assertions". It simplifies the understanding of the document. VI. "5. Test assertions and test cases" "its content is integrated in the test plan with JavaScript to attach test cases to the previously extracted test assertions;" It may be useful to add link to [WIDGETS-TESTS] one more time here. V. I've found strange symbols in document: "—", ... It may be not a problem in final document, but now it made a little difficulties to read document for me. I've used "download" link from cvs page: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/ ~checkout~/2008/dev-ind-testing/extracting-test-assertions-pub.html? rev=1.1&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1 Thanks, Dmitri. On Dec 10, 2009, at 12:53 PM, Dominique Hazael-Massieux wrote: > Le mardi 08 décembre 2009 à 11:09 +0100, Dominique Hazael-Massieux a > écrit : >> Here is (attached) what the document would like once made publication >> rules-ready. > > Based on Marcos’ kind offer to take an editing pass at the document, > I’ve put in CVS at: > http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/2008/dev-ind-testing/extracting-test-assertions-pub.html > > Dom > > >
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