- From: Stephane Boyera <boyera@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:01:56 +0200
- To: Renjish Kumar <renjish.kumar@gmail.com>
- CC: public-mw4d@w3.org
Hi Renjish, thanks for the extensive review. I would like to propose that you don't mix in the document the proof reading and the comments, as it is very hard to extract the comments. The proof-reading work is great and having it in the document is helpful. The comments are more easily discussed outside the document. So please in the future, extract them. For now, i tried to summarize them below (merging those from this version, from the one coming from the previous version: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-mw4d/2009Aug/0063.html ): 1- Change in structure: you are proposing to move up the executive summary as the first section, and the scope as the 5th section 2- adding a definition section (probably as the second section of the doc after the intro ?) 3-restructuring the audience as put in the latest document you sent did i miss any major comments ? Thanks Stephane Renjish Kumar a écrit : > Hello, > Pls. refer the attached doc for additional comments and corrections > on the Aug 28 version of the roadmap doc... I am at the 6th section > now... So, will be back soon with the final comments soon.... > > Regards > Renjish > > -- Stephane Boyera stephane@w3.org W3C +33 (0) 5 61 86 13 08 BP 93 fax: +33 (0) 4 92 38 78 22 F-06902 Sophia Antipolis Cedex, France
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