[action-535] edits for sec1-2

Hi all,

edits for sec1-2 are done, see

http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20-for-editing-sec1-sec2.html

Christian and I also tried to include the feedback from last week's call
http://www.w3.org/2013/06/05-mlw-lt-minutes.html#item04

I would propose the following:

- If you have general, high level feedback please reply to this mail and 
describe it
- If you have detailed comments (wording etc.) please download
http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/drafts/its20/its20-for-editing-sec1-sec2.html
convert to word / odf, make comments with change mark and send this as a 
PDF to the list.

To save time, I would like to do the re-integration of sec1-2 into the 
ITS2 master file before Dublin. If I don't hear protest by Friday 
evening EOB Europe I will do that.

We will discuss your input on Monday in Dublin and will try to wrap up 
ITS2 :)

This closes
https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/actions/535

Best,

Felix

Received on Tuesday, 11 June 2013 22:04:49 UTC